The second pass-through of Downtown is done.  This was the edit where I added/cut scenes in order to bring out or play down particular characters and plot points.  I think it worked quite well, although there are still a few inconsistencies I need to iron out.
The next run through will involve before mentioned ironing (oh, [...]

I’m currently working through my third round of revisions for Downtown, and I’m finding that the re-writing and (and new writing) is feeling somewhat akin to valiantly trying to ride my bicycle up Brunswick Road (a small, but still vicious, cousin of Mt Everest) in the rain.  With flat tyres.  And no pedals.

I’m [...]